Hello All,
We're looking for Pre-Alpha testers for "The Space Pilot" (a work in progress). Please leave the feedback on this forum. The URL is below:
http://wolfeairshows.com/thespacepilot
I'll update this sticky thread here first anytime the story is updated.
The Space Pilot - (WIP)
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1. Be nice
2. Critique, not criticism
3. Make sure to annotate your title
(WIP) - Work in Progress
(Alpha) - Alpha Testing
(Beta) - Beta Testing
Anything else (thoughts, ideas, story development, etc)
1. Be nice
2. Critique, not criticism
3. Make sure to annotate your title
(WIP) - Work in Progress
(Alpha) - Alpha Testing
(Beta) - Beta Testing
Anything else (thoughts, ideas, story development, etc)
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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)
Update:
New Choices for Military/Civilian
Grammatical/Spelling fixes
New Choices for Military/Civilian
Grammatical/Spelling fixes
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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)
Update as of today:
Total Word Count (Inc. Commands): ~15,000
Total Word Count (Exc. Commands): ~12,900
*Added more choices under the civilian branch
* +2,000 words (not inc. commands)
*numerous grammatical errors fixed
*Formating errors fixed
*Added more photos (civilian branch)
*added sound (civilian branch)
TO DO:
*Update Military Branch
*Finish Initial Training (Chapter 1)
Current Chapter Plans:
Initial Training (Chapter 1)
Gaining Hours (Chapter 2)
InterPlantary Flying (Chapter 3)
InterGalaxy Flying (Chapter 4)
Total Word Count (Inc. Commands): ~15,000
Total Word Count (Exc. Commands): ~12,900
*Added more choices under the civilian branch
* +2,000 words (not inc. commands)
*numerous grammatical errors fixed
*Formating errors fixed
*Added more photos (civilian branch)
*added sound (civilian branch)
TO DO:
*Update Military Branch
*Finish Initial Training (Chapter 1)
Current Chapter Plans:
Initial Training (Chapter 1)
Gaining Hours (Chapter 2)
InterPlantary Flying (Chapter 3)
InterGalaxy Flying (Chapter 4)
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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)
Update:
* Updated the text/backround to match the website
* Updated Links
Getting closer to letting CoG know about it... Oh, and fixed a couple of typos, too.
* Updated the text/backround to match the website
* Updated Links
Getting closer to letting CoG know about it... Oh, and fixed a couple of typos, too.
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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)
* Posted Topic on CoG
* Known Bug List
-PopUp for Restart text is unreadable. Need to find the color css for the default - works fine when "Black" is selected by the user.
* Known Bug List
-PopUp for Restart text is unreadable. Need to find the color css for the default - works fine when "Black" is selected by the user.