The Space Pilot - (WIP)

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The Space Pilot - (WIP)

Post by DC_Wolfe » January 8th, 2018, 12:31 pm

Hello All,

We're looking for Pre-Alpha testers for "The Space Pilot" (a work in progress). Please leave the feedback on this forum. The URL is below:

http://wolfeairshows.com/thespacepilot

I'll update this sticky thread here first anytime the story is updated.

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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)

Post by DC_Wolfe » January 25th, 2018, 8:58 pm

Update:

New Choices for Military/Civilian
Grammatical/Spelling fixes

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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)

Post by DC_Wolfe » January 29th, 2018, 2:36 pm

Update as of today:

Total Word Count (Inc. Commands): ~15,000
Total Word Count (Exc. Commands): ~12,900

*Added more choices under the civilian branch
* +2,000 words (not inc. commands)
*numerous grammatical errors fixed
*Formating errors fixed
*Added more photos (civilian branch)
*added sound (civilian branch)

TO DO:
*Update Military Branch
*Finish Initial Training (Chapter 1)

Current Chapter Plans:

Initial Training (Chapter 1)
Gaining Hours (Chapter 2)
InterPlantary Flying (Chapter 3)
InterGalaxy Flying (Chapter 4)

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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)

Post by DC_Wolfe » February 14th, 2018, 1:56 pm

Update:

* Updated the text/backround to match the website
* Updated Links

Getting closer to letting CoG know about it... Oh, and fixed a couple of typos, too.

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Re: The Space Pilot - (WIP)

Post by DC_Wolfe » February 17th, 2018, 4:02 pm

* Posted Topic on CoG

* Known Bug List
-PopUp for Restart text is unreadable. Need to find the color css for the default - works fine when "Black" is selected by the user.

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